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November 27, 2013
Suggester says:' This has a magical atmosphere that makes me feel like I am in the drawing. The colors are pastel like and soft
'Dream Rider by *jurithedreamer
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color pencil 2012.7-12
i originally started this piece last summer,
and come back to work on here and there.
now I kinda lost where I was gonna go with this piece (as usual...)
so anyone has any suggestion or critique on this piece?
thank you in advance!
Update 1/11> I clopped the file and pull some more light and shadow.
thank you so much for everyone how gave me your advice!
i originally started this piece last summer,
and come back to work on here and there.
now I kinda lost where I was gonna go with this piece (as usual...)
so anyone has any suggestion or critique on this piece?
thank you in advance!
Update 1/11> I clopped the file and pull some more light and shadow.
thank you so much for everyone how gave me your advice!
Update 12/24/13> thank you so much for DD!
and I made a sister piece of this,
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2045x2403px 9.02 MB
© 2013 - 2024 jurithedreamer
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ImpactI agree with what others are saying here about the piece. I think that in this particular composition, the unicorn is distracting. The character is beautifully done as usual, the hand is great and wings nicely rendered. I would suggest maybe cropping the unicorn out completely or perhaps expand the picture horizontally and make the unicorn more prominent so that she is resting on it? It may also help if the unicorn is looking in same direction as the character or at her as this also looks like it can be a reflection. (I don't know if that was your intention?)