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SAI 2011.9-12
it was a doodle, and I liked the idea,
so i finished the piece little by little.
2012/1/1 I uploaded to final version, thank you foe everyone advised me~!
it was a doodle, and I liked the idea,
so i finished the piece little by little.
2012/1/1 I uploaded to final version, thank you foe everyone advised me~!
Image size
2454x3471px 1.78 MB
© 2011 - 2024 jurithedreamer
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactI like the artwork. Things that 'I' think could be fixed up:
Muzzles pointing at one target?
They are pointing forward, but in mostly different directions. (Could make that work For you by targeting multiple foes, but it's trickier, and I'm not sure how to go about it here, since there is no room for them).
No controls.
Make it more obvious that the controls are Telepathic (perhaps expand the headpiece?), OR put in some controls (by left hand looks easiest, but where ever it fits).
I Do really like the piece though, I'm just a hard grader.
Have not found any (on the whole site) that get 20 Stars, best so far is 17.