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Genesis by jurithedreamer Genesis by jurithedreamer
Pencil, watercolor, pastel, conte 2012,0

h...help....
I don't know what I am doing any more,
does anyone have any critique for this piece?:(
I'm especially not too sure about the color...
it ended up so different from what I was planning to color.

I originally made this piece about a year ago,
then I felt like I didn't achieve what I wanted to do with the idea
so I made this one again.


old original image

line drawing
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:iconadrianamusettidavila:
adrianamusettidavila Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Excellent work!!!Clap Clap Clap 
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:iconpeculiar-productions:
Peculiar-Productions Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what does it mean? like all the details .. what do they represent?
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Vampirik-Gackt-sama Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this artwork. It's got nice texture and coloring. looks like it has some realism in it. I like how it seems to be a biblical message. Like the two people in the middle close to each other are Adam and Eve and the skeleton figure is Death resembling their spiritual death and fall after the forbidden fruit was tasted.
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Svethlana Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Nah, actually I liked it a lot. I love the colors you used.

I think it's a good evolution of the original one =)
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:iconjurithedreamer:
jurithedreamer Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
:thanks:
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:iconsvethlana:
Svethlana Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Besides, I think it's a good exercise to play a little bit with an artwork, you can develop new ideas and improve your technique.
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:iconlotusbitch:
Lotusbitch Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Gothic-ly gorgeous and marvelously macarbe :D
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:iconjurithedreamer:
jurithedreamer Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
:)
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:iconemilysodders:
emilysodders Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
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:iconblanket86:
blanket86 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful! Very nice style and colours! I love this drawing! :-)
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:iconbibiarts:
BiBiARTs Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
excellent !!!
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:iconlilithselke:
lilithselke Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Honestly, I find this picture captivating! I love the soft flow of colors mixed with the spiritual/dark theme. It's intriguing and mysterious. I love it!
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TheWiseWeirdProphet Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have to agree with Lindseymichelle, If I could give any critique it has to be that there shhould be some more vibrant colours in their to attract people to picture, Maybe some where in the middle and by the tree? (Cause I fugure you want to let people notice the fact theirs blood dripping on the tree. ) But you should gather some more advice in that regard before you change that, Don't wanna be the one to ruin you pic.

Seriously though, it's a great piece! :)
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:iconpiimocial:
Piimocial Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AWESOME
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:iconspazmastic:
Spazmastic Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
I actually love this more than the original. I find myself thinking, feeling about life, death, and sacrifice in order to make room for new life. (That's what the blood dripping above the tree sapling makes me think.)
Yet it still leaves me with wanting to know more. As for the colors I think they're perfect for this piece, not to bright and not to dark just right. I don't think I would ever get tired of this piece. Good job. :)
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samoholic Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love the colors, this looks amazing, I could see this on someone's back, and because of the colors I don't think it'll look too bad after a couple of years. Great job!
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:iconslate-sky:
Slate-sky Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Professional Artist
Exquisite!
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:iconlbkscorp:
LBKsCorp Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist
I just... I love it! I don't know what else to say... Except :+fav:
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Redbuick95 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
every nice
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LindseyMichelle Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I personally i enjoy the image a lot, particulary the subdued pallette that you chose. Though i feel like there needs to be a color that draws my eye throughout the image as my eyes are really just bouncing around confused what it should take in first. Other than that its a beautiful image :)
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:iconariesnamarie:
AriesNamarie Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm loving the colors
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:iconfokaron:
Fokaron Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it is an amazing piece is a wonderfull intrepretation of the circle of life, at least for me <3
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:iconxandra1047:
XandrA1047 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
very beautiful great movement :)
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:iconkaedegirl:
Kaedegirl Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your coloring style :D
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:iconheroesdaughter:
HeroesDaughter Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What is what you are not sure about?


(I find the colour to be beautiful, specially the blurry effect and the line that makes it all somehow oniric for the watcher)
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:iconimaginfm:
imaginfm Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
Beautiful!!!
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:iconmokinzi:
Mokinzi Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012   General Artist
Your work is so different and awe-inspiring. Your pieces remind me of old russian icons, not only because of the motifs and the traditional technique, but also because of the emotions rushing through me when looking at your work - it is like entering an old cathedral. :heart:
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Sasha-Drug Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012   Traditional Artist
I REALY love it
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:iconaireallinh:
AirealLinh Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
The color has a warm fuzzy vibe to it
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:iconclassicalnocturne:
ClassicalNocturne Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Ahhh....such soft colors. So lovely. I want to reach in and touch it.
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eightlimbs Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Absolutely beautiful, great job!
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:icontheyareghouls:
theyareghouls Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Gorgeous! I love all the detail, especially with all the stuff on the left and right sides.
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:iconeliminate:
Eliminate Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
have faith in yourself :) it looks awesome, and no one knows how different it is from your plan, only you. All we see is a finished image
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Maga-Link Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have one word for this: MAGNIFICENT!! :iconlawooplz:
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shinedust Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
I enjoy the color of this and how there can be multiple stories taken from this drawing.
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rick-metal-ayres Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
this looks incredibly cool! you shouldn`t worry about knowing what you`re doing if the results are being that good!amazing, really!
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Gunmetalblack Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Beautiful work! I like the soft details and the slightly blurry quality of the detailing in places really gives it a quality of being in motion. :) I think the colouring is splendid and looks very "classic" in a sense. :) Very well done!
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BloodyStripedRose Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing and very beautiful!
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onisuu Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Juri, it's beautiful! I love the slight shine on their eyelids, it's so pretty! ^^
I also love the colours! The warm coloured lights stand out from the blues and purples nicely! =3
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randomnessence Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
thats awesome, the way it all just fits
amazing
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slugette Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.. it's great! I love the colour actually.. :)

When I'm unsure about colour when I'm doing traditional work..
I scan it in, and change it around in Photoshop and see if any other colour works better...

I won't change it with this work though.. keep going!!! :)
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daniel1988lopez Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
AMAZING WORK! sorry about the caps, but this work deserved every letter
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