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Dream Rider by jurithedreamer Dream Rider by jurithedreamer
color pencil 2012.7-12

i originally started this piece last summer,
and come back to work on here and there.
now I kinda lost where I was gonna go with this piece (as usual...)

so anyone has any suggestion or critique on this piece?
thank you in advance!

Update 1/11> I clopped the file and pull some more light and shadow.
thank you so much for everyone how gave me your advice!:hug:

Update 12/24/13> thank you so much for DD!
and I made a sister piece of this,
Dream Guide:
Dream Guide by jurithedreamer

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Given 2013-11-27
Suggester says:' This has a magical atmosphere that makes me feel like I am in the drawing. The colors are pastel like and soft 'Dream Rider by *jurithedreamer ( Suggested by eindraa and Featured by ArtByCher )
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I agree with what others are saying here about the piece. I think that in this particular composition, the unicorn is distracting. The character is beautifully done as usual, the hand is great and wings nicely rendered. I would suggest maybe cropping the unicorn out completely or perhaps expand the picture horizontally and make the unicorn more prominent so that she is resting on it? It may also help if the unicorn is looking in same direction as the character or at her as this also looks like it can be a reflection. (I don't know if that was your intention?)
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AntoinetteAutumn Feb 17, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Sooo beautiful!!
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VaniraTheForestStar Dec 29, 2013
IT IS AWESOME ! YOU ARE A GREAT ARTIST !
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hannahelizabethh Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
amazing! :D
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:icongamewizard-2008:
gamewizard-2008 Dec 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
RrrrRIIIIDE THE DREEEEAM!!!!
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Aeltari Dec 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Brilliant, this reminds a friend of mine of me!  Wonderful work!
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BloodyDary Dec 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It's fantastic!!!!!!!!
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:iconangie-pictures:
Beautiful work! Congratulations on the DD! :iconflowerheartplz:
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:iconnumberjenn:

She reminds me of Holliday Granger from The Borgias.

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bloodawni Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stunning, this is really beautiful, such a soft and loving atmosphere.
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Euvanesiel Nov 28, 2013  Student Photographer
This has been a favorite of mine for such a long time! Congratulations on the DD! :D
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