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Dream Rider by jurithedreamer Dream Rider by jurithedreamer
color pencil 2012.7-12

i originally started this piece last summer,
and come back to work on here and there.
now I kinda lost where I was gonna go with this piece (as usual...)

so anyone has any suggestion or critique on this piece?
thank you in advance!

Update 1/11> I clopped the file and pull some more light and shadow.
thank you so much for everyone how gave me your advice!:hug:

Update 12/24/13> thank you so much for DD!
and I made a sister piece of this,
Dream Guide:
Dream Guide by jurithedreamer

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Given 2013-11-27
Suggester says:' This has a magical atmosphere that makes me feel like I am in the drawing. The colors are pastel like and soft 'Dream Rider by *jurithedreamer ( Suggested by iingo and Featured by ArtByCher )
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I agree with what others are saying here about the piece. I think that in this particular composition, the unicorn is distracting. The character is beautifully done as usual, the hand is great and wings nicely rendered. I would suggest maybe cropping the unicorn out completely or perhaps expand the picture horizontally and make the unicorn more prominent so that she is resting on it? It may also help if the unicorn is looking in same direction as the character or at her as this also looks like it can be a reflection. (I don't know if that was your intention?)
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:iconarinafoxy:
ArinaFoxy Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist
Beautiful dream flight...

I really like the way you draw hands, they look so delicate.
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:iconantoinetteautumn:
AntoinetteAutumn Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sooo beautiful!!
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:iconvaniratheforeststar:
VaniraTheForestStar Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
IT IS AWESOME ! YOU ARE A GREAT ARTIST !
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:iconhannahelizabethh:
hannahelizabethh Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
amazing! :D
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:icongamewizard-2008:
gamewizard-2008 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
RrrrRIIIIDE THE DREEEEAM!!!!
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:iconaeltari:
Aeltari Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Brilliant, this reminds a friend of mine of me!  Wonderful work!
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:iconbloodydary:
BloodyDary Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's fantastic!!!!!!!!
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:iconangie-pictures:
Angie-Pictures Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
Beautiful work! Congratulations on the DD! :iconflowerheartplz:
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:iconnumberjenn:
NumberJenn Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013

She reminds me of Holliday Granger from The Borgias.

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:iconcamelopardalisinblue:
camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stunning, this is really beautiful, such a soft and loving atmosphere.
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:iconeuvanesiel:
Euvanesiel Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Photographer
This has been a favorite of mine for such a long time! Congratulations on the DD! :D
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:iconsofiasevero:
SofiaSevero Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Finally something that REALLY deserves its DD !!
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:iconlullatia:
Lullatia Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ok.You are now my inspiration : ))))
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:icondamanyel:
Damanyel Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
she looks so pure and lovely! this is wonderful!! grats on the DD!
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:iconkitan777:
Kitan777 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
extremely gorgeous.So Beautiful,elegant and the soft vibe it's giving off (well,at least I think so anyway ^^; )
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:iconrochele10:
rochele10 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
beaiutful
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:iconnunezj:
nunezj Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
frisk me for contraband.
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:iconippien:
ippien Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Definitely worth the DD. It does take you into another world.
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:iconkawaii-niji-chan:
Kawaii-Niji-chan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
SO BEAUTIFUL!!! LOVE IT!!!Heart Heart Heart Heart Llama Emoji 02 (Blush) [V1] Llama Emoji 03 (Sparkles) [V1] Llama Emoji 23 (Shyness) [V1]
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:iconfrightful95:
Frightful95 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Absolutely beautiful
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:iconnekonekogirl04:
NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks beautiful, very nice! :D
Congrats on the DD! :meow:
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:iconkarinta:
Karinta Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
I like the delicateness of the pencil strokes..... :hug:
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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:iconxxmulti-bunny-chanxx:
xXMulti-Bunny-ChanXx Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kao moji 05 (Emoji) so beautiful!!!!
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:iconrachelillustrates:
rachelillustrates Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh wow, breathtaking work! Congrats on the DD too! Very well deserved.
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:iconkikiwicci:
kikiwicci Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the eyes look almost wet :o... this is amazing
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:iconharmoniousdreams:
HarmoniousDreams Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
This reminds me of that movie about the princess and the troll. Her grandmother with the spinning wheel in the magic room connected with magic invisible thread.. So beautiful.
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:iconatram95:
atram95 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Your draw is Magnificent!! Congratulation I love it!!
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:iconbear48:
bear48 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Professional
sweet job
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:iconpistachioinfernal:
PistachioInfernal Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Congrats on the DD! :)
It looks gorgeous and ethereal, a lovely moment, how dreams are supposed to be. Transporting you to a magical and wonderful world :heart:
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:iconambitiousauthor:
AmbitiousAuthor Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful!  Congratulations on the very well deserved Daily Deviation!
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:iconblanket86:
blanket86 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so amazing! I love this style and composition! Congratulations, You are very talented! :-)
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:iconeskoplja:
Eskoplja Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Wonderful work, beautiful :love:
Congrats on your DD :clap:
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:iconbraukun:
BrauKun Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
In traditional media!?, is impressive...is just impressive
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:iconfractaldragon:
Fractaldragon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
This is so beautiful, dreamy and gentle. There is such sweetness in her face. Beautiful image! Congrats on the DD!
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:iconrhymeswithfizz:
RhymesWithFizz Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Beautiful work. The light, fluffy colors match what this work's depicting in its characters. It makes the picture look as if it is in a dreamlike state. The face of the angel is remarkably realistic, as are the proportions put into all of it. Her hand could use a bit more work though; to me, the palm looks a bit too long, but otherwise, it's also great. What others are saying, though, about the unicorn being a distraction, I just can't see; it was the angel who caught my eyes in this picture.
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:iconspeeding-snail:
Speeding-Snail Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist
magnificent
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:iconmousse95:
Mousse95 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing work! beautiful.
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:iconleilabrownie:
leilabrownie Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Beautiful!
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:iconlostgryphin:
LostGryphin Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful - love the details and the soft colors
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:icontigabelle:
tigabelle Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Stunning work. You have undeniable talent, Congrats on the Daily Deviation! :huggle:heart:
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:iconrobson666:
robson666 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist
congratulations to the well deserved Daily Deviation  Clap Clap
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:iconisissousa2:
isissousa2 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
What a beautiful work and unique style! I love the delicate look and the characters! <3
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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:iconnasharios:
nasharios Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Simply gorgeous.
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:iconsatinephoenix:
satinephoenix Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
The unicorn is a beautiful part of this piece and you can see her warmth towards it. I'd just suggest pushing or pulling the focus a little more. 
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:iconmoonlight311:
moonlight311 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
what a sweet face
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:iconfluffy-maple-vodka:
fluffy-maple-vodka Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
pretty :D
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:iconalicenpai:
alicenpai Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really love the serene feel and soft colours in this!
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:iconblanket86:
blanket86 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful! Very interesting work!
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